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Re: The Battle with Perseus
Hey, Elinor! So, for my review of this, all I really want to do is point out several major inaccuracies you have included. What are your sources? Edith Hamilton? Because ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Revolution [Working title]
Thanks for your review of my Nero piece. Calling me a genius kinda sorta made my day. ;) Let's nit-pick yours a bit, shall we? The world is very bland. ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Determined: The Story of A Beautiful Jew. Chapter One.
Now, I hate to drop in and be the annoying Jew who comments on your Holocaust novel... but... I feel I must (: אז, לפני תחילת כל ההתנצלויות! (so all ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Stepfather
Hey, Helpful! Here as requested! ^_^ a hinging my or the Meh. Put these in italics, please (the "the" and the "my"). I had to read the sentence outloud to ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: The Report of Decius Curtius
Sorry, but Brutus and Cassius were brothers. It says so in the play. Actually, they were half-brothers (Cassius was married to Brutus's sister) but in Rome that was pretty much ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Testing the water...with an extract of mine
Hey, Lupus! Welcome to YWS! I'm Antigone. (: Yay! Someone else who writes werewolf fiction! So do I. They're so fun to write about, huh? But! on with the review... ...
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: Quote by Mwa!
Mwa = Moi. ^_^ If you meants "Quotes by me", that is. Yeah. That is all. June took all the things I was going to tell you in this review. ...
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: Lestat the Vampire A Parody
No, I did not rush. I am only saying that this is a summary of the plot of the story. Rice's prose can be so purple and over dramatic at ...
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: 1st 3rd person stroy
Hey, Mage. Antigone, here as requested. Well, it looks as though all of the nitpicks have already been taken, so I will do an overall, yes? First of all, tell ...
Dec 20, 2009 -
Re: Roses and Thorns (Part 1) - Prologue
Heyyy, That Black Rose. ;) Yes, I'm a latin nerd. So! I'm Tigger and I'll be your reviewer today. A girl of about sixteen limped slowly up the cobblestone streets, ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Thorn: Prologue
Hey Ellie! Ready for Caddie's first review in, like, forever? (: Nitpicks § Um... is there a real reason that you need this? Symbols are okay, but this symbol is ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: My Chemical Romance
Please give credit to the author of some of these lines or this is considered plagiarism. This is basically just you giving random commentary on a My Chemical Romance music ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: Sweet Dreams: The First YWS Story Creator
Several things first of all: -- This is a good idea, but perhaps it should be posted in Storybooks, and not the Literary Forums. -- Try not to use all ...
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: Mission Zero part 3
Hey there. :] So, I was gone from YWS for awhile, and I just saw my Will Review for Food thread today. :oops: Soo, here is your very long awaited ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Lestat the Vampire A Parody
Hi! I'm Antigone, and I'll be your reviewer for today. [= So, I'm a big Anne Rice fan, and I must admit, her characters are dreadfully easy to make fun ...
Aug 31, 2009
